What I did in my Revision

With the choice to revise a single unit project, my project of choice was project number one. For this project I decided to add another aspect of criticism on how Batman does his job. The aspect that I added was his use of fear as a weapon, and how he makes criminals fear him with his dark a menacing attire and brutal fighting style that usually sends criminals to the hospital before jail. The reason why I picked this project was because I felt that because it was the beginning of the semester, I was a different writer from how I am now. So, I wanted to revise it and see how I can change it. I also thought that the changes that I made would add to the depth of not only batman but the news reporters reporting on him.