For the other projects my revisions would be pretty different. For project two I would have just added more overall. I would have added more to the analysis of the movie I reviewed, and I would have put more emotion into my twitter criticism. For project three I would have added more subjects to test. In the experiment I only use three subjects blood samples, I would have added a couple more to give the experiment a more accurate set of data to analyze and come up with a conclusion about. And finally, for the fourth unit project I would have spoken to more of the heroes at the watchtower. Having those interviews with them in my notes for the ethnography would have given me a more in-depth representation of the mindsets that all of the heroes have in the watchtower. My ethnography was mainly based off of observation so more interviews would have helped greatly with the emotional depth of my writing.

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